Thursday, February 6, 2014

Craft Notes: “No Man’s Land” by Eula Biss from ‘Notes from No Man’s Land’

a.      Structure: Bolded sections (8 total). Different versions of the ‘no man’s land.’

b.      Techniques: Uses a book, her past and present interpretations (fiction!). Personal encounters turned to scenes. Insights thrown in from herself and her husband.

c.       Images: At the beginning of ‘On the Border,’ she does nothing but paint an image of her Chicago and then harshly contrasts it to Evanston.

d.      Phrases: “This is what white people do to each other, they cultivate each others’ fear.” 93% of murders are by men is “mass pathology.” “These are the murders that allow us to be afraid of who we want to be afraid of.”

e.      Themes: Fear (and its infusion in our lives as violent to others); water (used as a symbol of freedom and openness, but also of fear of the unknown and being limited); Race (the divisions of race in Chicago, but in Rodger’s park not. The idea of pioneering overtop of the black citizens. Being afraid of them, which hurts them and us.).


f.        Questions: Why Little House on the Prairie? Was saying “This land belongs to God” an attempt to generalize and tie up loose ends? It seems a little too easy that way.

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