Tuesday, January 14, 2014
Dad as a teenager
Dad
was “Kev” growing up. He was short, slim, and scrawny with not a hair on his
body save his dirty-blonde locks. He was a pretty-boy—one of those faces that
made the girls swoon despite his height challenge. But at home, he was the runt
of the guy, senior only to his little sister, Kim. When he was about 15, he
came outside in his blue Cavs tank top and gym shorts looking for his older
brother Vince. He had a plan. Together, they rigged an elaborate trap for their
older brother Kyle in the barn. First came the bucket of tar, then the chicken
feathers, fresh from the chickens in the back yard. By the end of the prank,
they were all covered in tar, so their father, Norvel, threw them in the tub
one by one and dumped gasoline on them. Doris rubbed them raw with a hard foam
scrubber. Once their skin was raw, Norvel gave them each a few good slaps and
sent them to the Hilltop Market to get some cigarettes. Dad ran down into the
fields instead chasing deer. He promised himself he’d catch one someday.
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Wow. What a story! You capture it in a few deft strokes. How did you learn this story? Put a comma after instead in the last sentence. You're good as evoking character with your descriptions.
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