Thursday, January 30, 2014

Craft Notes: “Land Mines” by Eula Biss from "Notes from No Man’s Land"

a.      Images: The first paragraph gives several images of undesired child behavior.
b.      Poignant quotes: “and established public education in America as the method we use to manage large populations of our own people who frighten us.” – suddenly relating to separated ideas. “universal, tax supported, free, compulsory, bureaucratic, racist, and class-biased,” describing the school systems.
c.       Voice: Authority position (having worked as a teacher). Compassionate voice. She wants to help; she wants to figure this out. Critical voice. She has an opinion and wants to prove it.
d.      Techniques: Juxtaposition of seemingly unrelated ideas (fear of children with fear of African Americans, creation of school system with controlling the African American population, “universal” and “bureaucratic”). Examples of children’s writing to show harsh themes of their world. Personal anecdote and personal interpretation of what it means.
e.      Structure: Somewhere between 8 and 10 sections. Each section mixes the personal and historical (unlike other works by her that switch sections as she switches from historical to personal).

f.        Is the reference at the end to 911? Does she mean her role as a teacher in the end was to keep kids there? I feel like that cuts it short. 

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